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Old 08-25-2008, 11:16 PM
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*~Lilliana~*

Lilliana


A story by XxAnnaxX
Note: The schools in this story is fiction. I make this up. Myself (:

Chapter 1
Meeting Me!

Hey! I'm Lilliana. I'm a pre-teen and I love to read. But, some bad things have been going on lately, which is very unusual. My mom and dad are getting a divorce, and Dad is moving to Chicago, while Mom is moving to New York City. And I have to pick who I want to live with. Mom said that I can only vist dad every 3 weeks because of the traveling cost. She said she dosen't want to spend 1,000 dollars for a plane ticket. So, there's Mom if I gotta live with her. But Dad on the other hand. "Lilliana! You ABSOLUTELY CAN'T GO SEE YOUR MOTHER!" He's usually really sweet and nice, but here on the other hand.. *whistles*
I just can't choose! I hate them getting a divorce... I need to make up my mind. Someday??? Ugh!

Chapter 2
Kristina
I picked Mom, because she actually lets me visit dad. There's my reason. It's August 25. School starts tomorrow.. She decided to leave tomorrow, because NYC schools start in late September, and she dosen't want me starting a school for 1 day, then leaving. Goodbye, Hunter Farland Middle School. Hello, Campground Falls Middle School. And guess what? Central Park in NYC is only 2 blocks from my new school. Mom said that I could walk here after school and study or play. She wouldn't be worried. As long as I had my cell, I was fine.
IN NYC...
I think NYC is going to be fun! Mom says I'm allowed to go anywhere in NYC, with my cell! I love it!
2 HOURS LATER...
I'm going to a small store 5 blocks away. I get to walk or take a taxi. I choose walking to see NYC a bit more. I saw Abercrombie and squealed. I ♥ Abercrombie! I run into the store. A girl trips me. "Woah!" I fell. She hopped with laughter. "That isn't really funny..." I mumble. "Oh, sorry." She saw my outfit and stared. "You are really pretty..." she sighed. "Oh, really?" I asked. "Yea! Hi, I'm Kristina, sorry about the trip." she said. "I'm Lilliana." I said, shaking her hand. "I'll see you around! Here's my cell number. Put it in your phone, okay??" Kristina said. "Sure, here's mine." I wrote it down on a piece of paper and gave it to her. She put it in her pink flip phone. "Cool." she said. "Later." I walked into Abercrombie and suddenly got a text. I dug through my purse for my phone. It said:

Testing! It's Kristina!

I texted her back.

It worked, no worries. TTYL

I finally got to go into Abercrombie and buy some decent clothes. Then, I decided to go to Central Park. "Um, excuse me, ma'am." I said to a sweet old lady. "Do you know where Central Park is?" "Oh, well." she started. "Go left at that red light and just keep walking. You'll hit it!" "Thanks!" I said, running toward the intersection. I waited until the walk sign and walked the way the lady had said. I ended up at a construction zone, and paniked. I tried to turn around but the crowd wouldn't let me. I was scared. Then I was pushed into a dark alley. People were bustling in the alley to the other side of the street. I was pushed to the other side of the street. "Oh no, no service!" I yelled, looking at my phone. I saw a pay phone across the street. I dug for 3 quarters. I found two. I dug more, and finally found another. I called mom. No answer. "Oh no! I'm lost!!"

Chapter 3
Some Good Things!
I got a text fom Kristina.
Where are you? I was wondering if you wanted to go on a shopping spree, or maybe hang out at my apartment.
I groaned. Then I topped and looked up. Maybe this was my chance! Kristina is a long time New Yorker, right? So if she ws, maybe she could text me directions! Ihurried and texted her back.

Listen, I'm lost! If you could get m e directions be texting me, I'd like... I don't know! But that would rule!

It tooks about 5 minutes for her to text back.

Kristina: You're lost? Well, where are you?
Me: [now in the alley walking towards construction site] I'm in front of a huge construction zone. It says they are building a business building.. J.C Movers and Business...
Kristina: Oh! Do you want Central Park, I will meet you there. Here are directions. Just cross the street, and then keep going. You will hit Central Park. There is a bench beside a water fountain there, meet me there
Me: Thanks!
Kristina: NP


I hurried in that direction. Kristina was right! Loads of kids were bubbling out of Central Park. More people were going in, too. I ran in with he flow of people, and I saw Kristina. She smiled and waved. "Thank you so much!" I said. "Anytime!" she said. "Oh, slap some lipstick on!" I dug in my purse for my lipgloss. "I was kidding (:" She smiled. "Well, now that I know the way home, I need to go so my mom won't be worried." I said. "Later! Thanks again." I started to walk away. "Anytime!" she said, and started toward the other side of the park.
Then I stopped. "I totally forgot!"



More coming soon! Give me critisism, comments, anything!

Last edited by XxAnnaxX; 08-28-2008 at 09:54 PM. Reason: New chapter! Woo!
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Old 08-25-2008, 11:21 PM
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Very nice writing, I will continue to read on and critique your work throughout the story! Keep it coming!

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Old 08-26-2008, 10:06 PM
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