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ok sounds like a good idea victoria
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(I have no idea when Anastasia should come in...)
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The next day at school when Dove, Ivory, and Lillie go for the first time
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(Isn't James the son of Rumplestiltskin? I don't know much about that fairy tale character, but he always struck me as an antagonist. Wouldn't that make James one of the bad guys?
Okay, bad guy wise here's what I'm thinking: everyone takes a fast liking to Hunter because he's smart and cunning. Hunter and Shang and maybe James can get close, and Hunter can indirectly convince them to "join the dark side". The bad guys are trying to get rid of the good, right? Maybe there can be a dance at the school, and there can be an "after party" where Hunter groups them all together and the dark ones from the fairytale world can come and destroy them, or something to that affect. Just my idea, though! ) |
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( Sounds like an interesting idea Hazel~ Oh and in Once upon a time, Rumplestiltskin is basically a good guy from what I understood)
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Yes, in Once Upon a Time, Rumplestiltskin used to be bad (he was The Dark One), and he still is The Dark One, but he is trying to be good because of his son Niel/Bey, his grandson Henry, and his love Belle.
The only reason he was evil in the first place was because he was afraid and wanted to protect his son and himself. Then he got greedy and couldn't stop. But coming to Storybrooke was a fresh start for him, and now he is trying to be good. |
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(No, Maxine and Imogen with a bunch of other girls are on their way because they got knocked out. The lady at the orphanage was going to [SPOILER ALERT AHEAD] make all the girls personal servants in England I have writers block, though. D: And Dex is travelling too, with Stone)
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Sounds like a great idea, Hazy! You might not want it this way, but could Ivory be the only character to hate his guts since she's naturally kind of paranoid? She's been abandoned and tossed away so much she naturally isn't as trusting as everyone else, so it kind of makes sense.
It's fine if you really want me to change, but that was just how I was going to write it... |
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OOH OOH OOH IDEA!!!!!!!!!!! What if Hunter didn't know which person is the descendant of Peter Pan, since all of the others are the same gender as their character, but Astrid isn't?!? Hunter and Hook could be looking for a BOY, and not notice Astrid!!! Since Peter/Astrid is the main enemy of Hook/Hunter, it would be really cool if Hunter and Hook couldn't find Peter's descendant/ figure out who Astrid is!!!
Just an idea of course............ but would be awesome!!! |
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(I think I'll continue with Nobody's POV. It's more interesting. Also, wouldn't it be interesting if we all knew each other somehow? Also, Astrid you lucky >:P!! Heehee just remembering she's
Nobody's POV Dextrous enjoyed this. Stone was exciting. They "juiced" dogs, ate fish, and then... a bath. Dex was overjoyed, while Stone was simply disgusted, thinking that the mere scent of soap was worse then fish. Stone was officially named. Dextrous bathed deeper into the soap. It was time to get out. "HOW DO YA LIVE WITH THIS STUFFS?!" Stone exclaimed. "It's called soap." Dex explained. He shook his fur out and waited for the right moment watched cartoons had prepared him for. "Mrewoofwoofwoof!" He said, in a rather cat-dog hybrid like tone. He paused, then heard it. "WOOF WOOF WOOF." He was not hiding food in his pocket anymore. Maxine shook Imogen "Get up!" she said in a febrile tone. "OH, SERVANTS!" Maxine pretended to be knocked out. "Restless sleepers. Good, they'll be excellent seamstresses." (I think that making them short and usually ending with dialogue is better for me. It gives me lots of ideas) |
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Ashley:
We ride our bikes into the driveway of my grandparents' house. Logan comes rushing out of the house screaming. "HEY ASH WHERE WERE YOU AND WHO ON EARTH ARE YOU WITH?" "Ella, Jacques, this is my little brother Logan." "IM NOT THAT LITTLE! ONLY BY 14 MONTHS!" "Whatever." Ella giggles. (I feel so excluded in this RP ) Last edited by Jenny Hollybell; 11-18-2013 at 01:28 AM. Reason: No More Luke. |
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Once upon a time... not so long ago
Come on over to england jenny!!!
And electro, you can change to be dextrous rather than Imogen or maxine if you want. |
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(Ooh, I like that, Liri! Maybe they could think it's James or Shang or Luke maybe? And Night Wish, that's totally okay for Ivory to hate Hunter, or at least not trust him. But I was also thinking that Dove could join the Ivory/Astrid/Lillie best friendship?
Oh, and maybe Dove can be the oldest out of Ivory, Astrid, and Lillie? Wendy always seemed motherly and protective of her brothers and the Lost Boys, so maybe she can kind of "look out" for her soon to be sisters and soon to be friend?) Dove At around four, Grace took Ivory and Lillie to the orphanage so they could pick up some stuff they needed for the "sleep over". I stayed home to wash the lunch dishes. I shuttered at the thought of Lillie living in the same house as I, 24/7. "Come on, Dove. You need to grow up and get over your hatred of Lillie. She's had a rough life. You need to go easy on her," I told myself aloud as I loaded the last plate into the dishwasher. I rinsed my hands with the hot water and dried them on the dish towel. I went upstairs to my room and started unpacking. Afterall, I had just moved here a few days ago. It all seemed so soon, so rushed. Grandmother admitting she was sick, then quickly sending me away. Aunt Grace wanting to adopt two girls right after welcoming me into her home and life. I hung up a shirt in my closet, wondering what to wear for my first day of school in London tomorrow. Aunt Grace had enrolled Ivory, Lillie, and I into ninth grade (I totally forgot the name of the school). I was nervous, because Grandmother had always homeschooled me. I was examining my clothing options when I heard Aunt Grace's car drive up. Ivory and Lillie dashed upstairs into Ivory's room, deep in conversation. I sat down on my bed. Against my will, I started to think about the contrasts of the girls' and my lives. I don't have anything in common with them I assume. I went through a mental list, appearance and personality wise. Then it dawned on me: all three of us were orphans. I was fortunate enough to have family take me in, but what if Grandmother and Grace never had? I probably would have ended up just like them, somewhere in an orphanage in Paris. Aunt Grace seemed bent on adopting Ivory and Lillie. Maybe I should make an effort to get to know them. After all, I couldn't judge a book by its cover. I got up and peeked my head into Ivory's room. Both girls were sitting, leaning against the bed, talking in hushed voices. "...Maybe if we opened a window," Lillie suggested. "We're two stories up. She would never be able to climb that, even if she does hop on roofs for sport," Ivory replied. "Ivory, what are we going to do!" Lillie moaned, tossing her head back in frustration. "As much as I like the Lovelys, we can't be separated from Astrid. We have to find a way." "I know," Ivory said and put an arm around her friend. I decided now would be a good time to reveal that I had been eavesdropping on them. I stepped into the doorway. "What are you two talking about?" Hunter The bell rings, and I hurry out of the school. I go over to Elisabeth's, and make up a story about how I need tutoring. I already know practically everything there is to know about this mortal world. I leave Elisabeth's, and start to wander the streets of London. I need a place to crash for the night. I'm tired of sleeping in trees or abandoned alleys. Just then, I bump into two familiar faces. The redhead and Shang. "Oh my gosh, I'm so sorry!" The girl apologized immediately. "It's okay," I say with a laugh. "Marina, right?" She nodded. "Shang had offered to walk me home. Wanna join?" "Sure!" I reply enthusiastically. I have to get to know these people. "So that biology teacher, Mr. Baschez just kept rambling on about the structure of the cell. He kind of lost me at cellular respiration and all those ATP's and energy and stuff." Last edited by Hazel Brightsparkle; 11-12-2013 at 06:56 AM. |
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They should think its Jem! Because he jokes around a lot and teases people... kinda like Peter!
Yes I think that Dove should catch them sneaking Astrid in, and then become a part of their circle! Yea I think thats a good idea Hazy about Dove being the oldest/protective Also, I think Hunter and Hook should know Astrid is one of the fairytale descendants, but maybe they think she is the descendant of... maybe... Little Red Riding Hood? I dunno... someone. Because! What if they get all the characters together at a party or something and then Hunter kidnaps them and takes them all to Hook in Neverland, and then Astrid goes all Pan on them and controls the island! heheheheheee cause ya know how he is connected to Neverland.... all that stuffs.... Anywho..... I will post tomorrow sometime! |
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Lillie
"I don't want to stay in this place any more than you do," Ivory replies. "And it's obvious that Dove isn't exactly going to roll out the welcome mat. But Miss Lovely seems determined to adopt us." "So what do we do about Astrid?" I ask, worried. "We can't just leave her there." We immediately stop talking when Miss Grace walks in with a smile on her face. "Hello, girls! Great news!" Uh-oh…. "Miss Lovely - " Ivory begins. "Please, call me Grace." She says. "I'm going to enroll the both of you in high school. You'll be starting tomorrow, while I take care of the adoption papers." "Uh - we - " Ivory sputters. My mouth drops open, but I quickly shut it. Not just adoption, but high school!?!?! I was homeschooled at the orphanage for a long time. I've never been to a public school before. I am beginning to feel nervous about this... "Um, Miss - Grace?" Ivory says slowly. "I left something behind at the orphanage. Could I go with you tomorrow to get it?" "Me, too!" I exclaim, sounding a little too eager. “I mean... I have a few goodbyes I'd like to say. Could I come too?" "We can go after dinner today, if you'd like." She smiles. "There's no need to worry about school, girls. Dove will be starting right along with you. You won't be alone." "Sounds great." I spit out, my voice dripping with sarcasm. "I'm thinking running away isn't such a bad idea." Ivory jokes as Miss Grace leaves the room. “Seriously.” I mutter. I am so furious right now, I could burst into tears. This can’t get any worse! Ivory and I hurry to her room upstairs, whispering about how we will get Astrid here. She tells me there is an attic perfect for her to stay in. "I don’t know how we will let her in, maybe if we opened a window." I suggest as we sit down by her bed. "We're two stories up. She would never be able to climb that, even if she does hop on roofs for sport," Ivory replies. "Ivory, what are we going to do! As much as I like the Lovelys, we can't be separated from Astrid. We have to find a way." "I know," Ivory puts an arm around me. "What are you two talking about?" a voice says suddenly. I jump to my feet and turn to the door, completely startled. My eyes narrow. Dove. “It’s not right to eavesdrop!!” I hiss, my face turning scarlet. “You should have knocked, ever heard of that?!” I turn away, trying not to fly off the handle anymore. Our plan has been ruined. Dove will tell Miss Grace what she heard and we’ll never be able to sneak Astrid in. We’ll never see her again. I cover my face with my hands and burst into tears. And I thought this couldn’t get any worse… Marina As Shang and I continue to our homes, Hunter suddenly runs into us. "Oh my gosh, I'm so sorry!" I apologize. "It's okay," Hunter laughs. "Marina, right?" I smile and nod. "Shang had offered to walk me home. Wanna join?" "Sure!” He replies enthusiastically. "So that biology teacher, Mr. Baschez just kept rambling on about the structure of the cell. He kind of lost me at cellular respiration and all those ATP's and energy and stuff." I laugh. “At least you got there, he lost me at the very beginning!” Hunter, Shang and I chat for a while, my concerns about Hunter vanishing. Elisabeth was definitely wrong about him! “Well, here’s my home!” I say. “See you later!” I wave and walk up to the front door. When I enter the house, Miss Powell greets me. “Hello Marina! How was your first day of school?” “It was great.” I grin. “I already made two friends.” (or so she thinks… ) |
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