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"Nightfall is approaching. We should rest," Maverick advised. "We've covered a lot of ground for the day." "I agree, but I'm not sure we'd feel comfortable setting up camp on this border..." I said, warily eyeing our surroundings. The others looked like they agreed with me, but I could tell everyone was exhausted. I sighed. "Still, we need to get some rest." Soon, we managed to find a small crevice formed by two enormous boulders. It opened up to a small cave. Reasonably sheltered from both harsh weather and Rameon patrols. We set up camp the best that we could, with our meager supplies. There wasn't very much food; only the leftovers from that morning. "We'd better have someone stay up as lookout," I said, still feeling unsettled by the border lands. I glanced around. Calaeron and Aranel looked exhausted from all the fighting they'd done that day. Rune was too new and untried; Maverick was new as well, though I felt like he could be trusted, I wasn't taking the chance. "I'll take first watch." It didn't take long for everyone to fall asleep, considering the day we've had. When I was sure no one was watching, I let myself slump to the ground at the cave's entrance. The responsibility of being leader had never felt this crushing. "Rilla," I muttered to myself. "I really wish you were here." A few tears escaped and fell silently to the cold, rocky ground. This was all my fault. I should have listened to her, we shouldn't have split up. And now, I wasn't sure I could do this anymore. I've never been good at reassuring the group, at keeping our morals up. I glanced up at the thin silver gleam of the moon. Like it or not, I was going to have to be strong. If anything happened to anyone else in the group, it'd be my fault. (We can skip to the next morning, if you guys like. Cress just needed her moment.) |
#107
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I feel slightly embarrassed to admit this, but I'm not sure what happens next... Maybe we could brainstorm and see what comes up? Again, I'm so sorry for not posting!
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#108
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It's fine, Hazel! We're all familiar with writer's block.
I don't have a whole lot of ideas for this, but I do think we needed to rescue the captured characters now. Remember when I had that awful idea to have Raven and Nyxie disguise as Tayvians? How about instead of that, our Tayvian characters disguise themselves as Rameons for the rescue? I don't know, it might still be a terrible idea. But we can't exactly fight our way into the Rameon king's castle... |
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Night, that's genius! I LOVE that! Oh, so what if once they infiltrate the Rameon castle, everyone finds out they're actually Tayvians, so it's a race against time to get out of there. Just a thought...
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I am gonna give you me and 3 of my closest friends.
Name: Rose Starbloom Gender: Female Personality: Brave, smart, precocious, outgoing, talkative, and leader. Appearance: Curly Red hair, light skin, freckles, blue eyes. Type of Creature: Fairy Family: Fairy Other: Is a magical fairy who leads the rest in the scepter search. Name: Breezy Dazzlebee Gender: Female Personality: Kind, sweet, generous, caring, and loyal. Appearance: Wavy Black hair, light skin, brown eyes. Type of Creature: Fairy Family: Fairy Other: Is a sparkly dazzling jewel of joy! Name: Honey Pumpkinsparkle Gender: Female Personality: Kind, sweet, angelic, and dainty. Appearance: straight/wavy Blonde hair, light skin, green eyes. Type of Creature: Fairy Family: Fairy Other: Sparkles and shines as far as the eye can see! Name: Primrose Garlicwillow Gender: Female Personality: Nice, sweet, funny, and happy. Appearance: Long straight black hair, light skin, blue eyes. Type of Creature: Fairy Family: Fairy Other: Has the power of water, fire, and ice! Thanks so much! |
#111
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Um... I think you posted this on the wrong thread. If you're looking for the one where Stormy creates stories of how your fairy got her name, that's under the "Pixie Tales" forum, not the "Neverland Narritive" forum.
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Actually I wasn't on the wrong thread.
ROSE STARBLOOM AND HER ADVENTURES "Rose come here!" Breezy Dazzlebee said. Rose Starbloom walked to Breezy (where the swing set was). They both got onto a swing, and swung into the air at the same time. "Honey, Breezy! You have to try these swings they're amazing!" screamed Rose and Breezy. At once, two fairies sprung onto the swings. They're swings flew so high, that Primrose saw something twinkling. "Do you guys see those twinkles on the other side of Pixie Hollow?" asked Primrose. "I see it!" said Rose. "Me too!" said Breezy. "Me three!" said Honey. "Girls, we must travel into the world of the Rameons' palace. There we shall find...The golden scepter!" Rose said. "The golden scepter? That's the queen's wand!" said Honey concerned. "Oh girls, we got to get it back!" said Breezy. "Form a line. Honey behind me. Breezy behind Honey. Primrose behind Breezy." said Rose. They flew up the mountain that separated the Rameons' palace, and Pixie Hollow. After the fairies had been flying up that mountain for a long time, they wanted to rest. "Can we please go to bed now?" asked Honey. "Yeah, we're tired." complained Primrose. "Fine girls. We can go to bed." said Rose. Soon Rose heard tons of small goodnights coming from all around. "Goodnight." They all fell asleep. When morning hit the sky, the first one to wake up was Rose. She woke up all the others. They finally reached the top. Now for the hard part. They had to find a way to get down the mountain... CHAPTER 2 WILL BE IN MY NEXT POST |
#113
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Rose, you are perfectly welcome to join this RP, and we'd love to have you.
However, a RP is a collaborative piece of writing, so you really should acknowledge what others have posted before you. It's kind of like one big story we all write together, not really a chapter by chapter story you write by yourself. Like Popcorn said, that would be a Pixie Tale. Hazel has previously wrote that creatures aren't separated by species (like fairies), rather, all the magical creatures live together in the countries of Tayvia and Ramea. Therefore, I'm afraid there is no Pixie Hollow in this RP, it's not a pixie RP. Sorry if that's what you thought this was! And I should point out that the Scepter we are searching for is not a "golden scepter" and it doesn't belong to any queen. It is a magical object that we must find to restore peace to Tayvia and Ramea, not a queen's golden wand. I believe one of the rules for this RP was that you can only have three characters, so I'm afraid you can't create four. And another thing, you can't make Rose the leader of the whole Scepter search (as you have written on her form), especially not without discussing it with everyone else, because that borders on god-modding. I'm sorry if what I explained seemed mean, or if I offended you in any way. We'd love to have you write with us, but please first read through what has already been posted and fit your own posts to that. Last edited by Night Wish; 04-03-2014 at 08:24 PM. |
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Rose, like Night said, an RP (short for role play) is, in simplistic terms, we all have our own characters and write a story together, following the plotline created by someone (in this case, me). Your post was more of a story, with chapters and titles and your characters. As Night said, there is no Pixie Hollow in this RP and the "golden scepter" isn't a queen's wand. If your intention was to make a story, then you should check out the Pixie Tales forum.
If you would like to partake in this RP and we would love to have you join, then please keep in mind the rules: Quote:
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#115
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And a week later I post...
First off, I would like to apologize because this RP has been very slow and inactive. It is mainly my fault. But, now we're almost past the writer's block and we can really get this RP started! I think once we get more into the rising action the pace will pick up. So let's get down to business! (Misty and Ruby ) So the current plan is for the Tayvian wilderness group (Maverick, Rune, Cress, Calaeron, Aranel; we'll call them Group A) to infiltrate the Rameon castle as Rameons, and rescue the imprisoned Tayvian group (Rilla, Ariellia, Raine, Kai; we'll call them Group B) but someone finds out Group A is actually Tayvians. So it's going to be a race against time to get out of there... To add onto that idea, what if they don't make it out in time, and "fail"? But somehow they rally all of the Tayvians, and they can overthrow the Rameons... Thoughts, guys? Lastly, I edited my first post to include everyone's characters. Once again, I'm so sorry this RP has been so slow. |
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Sounds good to me! I think Kai is going to bring food to the prisoners soon, without Nyxie this time, so her and Rilla can talk.
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Sounds like a good plan!
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#118
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Okay, sounds good, Liri!
And yay, Coconut! I wasn't sure if you were still in this RP, but I'm so happy you are!!! |
#119
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As Nyxie questioned my sister, Raven came up with a snort, holding an older prisoner's arm. "You can't even get her name, after five minutes of trying?" Raven rolled her eyes. "I can see how well this is going." Nyxie scowled. "What are you doing here, Raven? Father put me in charge of questioning." "Are you sure you're up to it? Daughter or not, how do you think he'd react if you can't get a single answer out of any of them?" She gestured to the captive Tayvians. "I'd like to see you do better," Nyxie snapped. I listened as the old man walked over to the bars of Rilla's cell and spoke urgently, "Before you got captured, did you know a girl? Half fairy, half wizard. Her name's Crescent, Cress for short." "Cress?" Rilla sounded surprised, and suspicious. "Who are you? Why are you asking this?" He sighed. Over the sound of Raven and Nyxie's arguing, I barely made out his whispered words. "She is my daughter." Raven froze, but Nyxie didn't seem to have heard anything. "What?" Nyxie snapped at her. Without answering, Raven turned and ran out of the dungeon. Rilla and I locked eyes briefly, before she turned back to the old man. She was about to talk, when Nyxie called a guard over to return the man to his cell. "We aren't done here." Nyxie hisses at Rilla, before stomping away. "Kai..." Rilla whispers. "I- I will go get you some food. All of you." I reply, running to the kitchen and back. "Here." I say giving all the new prisoners food. Rilla introduced me to Ariellia, an Angel, and I introduced her to Raine, a quiet Elf who had been here for a while now. "How are you?" Rilla asks softly. "I'm ok..." I say, just as quietly, "But I miss you." I say, stifling a small sob. "Oh sweetheart!" Rilla exclaims, reaching through the bars in an attempt of a hug, sorrow and pain in her expression again. "I hoped you would come rescue me. But now..." I trail off, crying silently. "Shh shh shh." Rilla says, trying to calm me down, "Don't worry. I will still get you out of here. I promise." She says, looking straight into my eyes, "I promise." |
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I'm sorry I haven't posted yet, but will try to tomorrow!
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