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Old 07-04-2012, 08:29 PM
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Heart A story : How Peter Pan got his hat


One day Peter Pan Was Flying across Never Land. He came across the most beautiful Red feather on Skull Rock. He decided to take it. Later on he found some cloth in the shape of a hat at his hideout. The only idea Peter Pan had
was too make it into a hat! He wore his hat everywhere, and never lost it! He was closer to that hat than he was with tinkerbell!
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Great story, Waterbender! May I suggest a few things for you, if you don't mind?

I suggest that perhaps you can extend the story a little, with more details? I'm a bit confused where Peter Pan found his hat (Like, in a beach? Forest?), where did he gather the cloth and red feather, and where did he made his hat?

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Old 07-05-2012, 01:54 PM
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I liked your story, Waterbender. I wonder if the hat helped Peter Pan. And good ideas, ElementalEmpress.

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