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(I'm so sorry I haven't been able to post yet! Thanks everyone for getting this going! I am planning to have a long post tomorrow. Since school started back, I haven't had much time. But, I love what everyone has done!
Ray, Ruby and I talked and I think what we decided was that Maverick wouldn't tell the group about his Rameon heritage right away. I think it's going to slip somehow, which would cause a plot twist and tension that would be resolved. Ruby, is that would you had in mind?) |
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Sorry, I've been busy. ill post later
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And it's perfectly fine, lots of us are busy because of school. I hope you don't mind all the arguments Rilla has gotten into with Cress. If you don't like what I posted, I can change it. |
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Thank you, Hazel ♥ |
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"Oh, Maye, I'm so sorry," I said, going over and giving her a hug. "We'll get her back, I promise." Rilla added. "Who's there! Oh. It's only you guys. I'm back from my little food-finding adventure that I had." Ari said, coming into the cave with a fish. Rilla informed her about my mother, and her words made me burst into tears. "Oh no! I guess we have to go on without her, unfortunately." I can't just leave her! "Anyway, is everyone up? I think we should start going to find the Scepter." Ari continued. "Yes, maybe later. We need to enjoy that the Rameons have not invaded this cave yet." said Rilla. Rilla had a point, the Rameons were everywhere, we were lucky they haven't found this place yet...unless they have since mom is gone! Crescent frowned at Rilla. "What do you suggest, we stick around here and wait for them to find us? We stay for a day or two, at the most. Then we need to move out. We have to find the scepter as soon as possible." "Who knows when or how we'll be able to find a safe place again?" Rilla argued. "Which makes it all the more important to find the Scepter and stop them!" Crescent retorted. Ugh, they're fighting, again! Out of the corner of my eye, I noticed Calaeron sadly walking out of camp. Does he think he did something wrong? I hope not! But hey, I wonder where he is going... (Maye follows him into the woods) |
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Sounds good to me! I like the idea of him keeping it a secret better. Then we will have more drama when it comes out. I fixed my last post. Hope its ok!
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I think I'm going to quit the rp since I have not been active on it so, have fun even if I'm not posting
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I thought I'd be really busy with school, but it looks like everyone else is too. These RPs aren't going fast anymore, so I guess I will make a second character.
Name: Raven Gender: Female Age: 16 Personality: Clever, sly, cruel, merciless, proud Appearance: Attached Type of Creature: Dark wizard Family: all Rameons Other: Works for the Rameon king Raven.jpg (Thought the RP needed an evil character. ) |
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(Night, I love the idea of Cress and Rilla being best friends, but disagree on some things. My Mainland best friend and I have a similar vibe going on the Mainland, which makes it even better now that I can relate to Rilla!
Jenny, I like how Hazel gets captured by the guards! I was actually going to say something about having her there, I was kind of hoping for it to be just the kids. But what you wrote is fine! Thanks Liri for starting it off! At Saria's words, Cress and I rushed out of the cave to see the newcomer. "Well well well," Cress said. "What do we have here? A runaway? How can you expect us to believe that?" She folded her arms. I walked around the centaur. He had a speckled back with different shades of brown and grey. He had wispy adobe brown hair pulled off to the left. I looked straight into his eyes. They held sadness and misery but also spirit, like a caged bird wanting to be free. "What do you call yourself?" I enquired. I made myself appear emotionless, so if this centaur were a traitor, he wouldn't know anything about me. You could tell a lot about a creature through body language alone. "Maverick," The centaur answered, sticking his hand out. I shook it. "Welcome, Maverick. Come into the cave." Cress gestured to the vines covering the entrance. Calaeron held the foliage out for us, as if a gentleman would hold a door. Maverick muttered a thank you, and I nodded my head gratefully and smiled faintly. "Maverick," I said, sitting down on the log bench next to Saria in dryad form. "Are you hungry? We have a few berries if you'd like them." He shook his head. "No, thank you. I'm sorry, but I don't know your names." Cress blushed. "Oh, that's right! I'm Crescent, but you can call me Cress. And this is Maye, Saria, Calaeron, Ariellia, Mistique, and Rilla." She pointed to us. "Rilla and I are the leaders." I gazed at Maverick's eyes. "So how did you survive the Rameon attack?" He opened his mouth to answer, but we all jumped when we heard a trumpet blow on the mountain. Calaeron, who had stood guard over the cave while we were talking, burst into the cave. "They're here." (So basically my idea is the Rameons come and capture some of us but not all, and there at the Rameon prison they could find out more about the Scepter, and Briella could meet Kai, and find out more about where Hazel is?) |
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( Sounds good Hazy. And again, can Saria and Maverick be good friends? )
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(Sure, Ray! Maybe they could have something in common?
So who wants their characters to get captured? What I was thinking is some of the characters get captured and the remaining ones break into the palace and retrieve them. Maybe since the Rameons have come, the group splits off into two and one of the groups get captured? I'm also planning to make another character soon. An evil one this time!) |
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(Oh yes, of course!
Perhaps Maverick should escape the invasion and help lead the others to Ramea, since he knows his way around.)
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Hmm. I think Calaeron needs to escape the invasion. This will make him hate himself more
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Also, since her mother got taken what if they met up together again in jail or something? Just ideas... |
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Wait, Hazy, who's Briella? I don't remember having a character named that...
And I think either Cress or Rilla should end up not captured. The group should at least have one leader left. "You called for me, Your Majesty?" I walked into the king's throne room, my long cloak trailing behind me. "Ah, Raven." Balthazar smiled at me, but there was no warmth in the smile. "It seems that there are rumors of... a group of Tayvians who have eluded us for quite some time. It seems that they are on their way to search for the Scepter." "Well, we can't have that, now, can we?" My whole body comes to life at the thought of a hunt. The chase, the fight, the terror in the eyes of my prey. I smiled. "My thoughts exactly." Balthazar nodded to the door of his throne room. "You can find your army waiting just outside." As I turned to go, his voice suddenly turned deeper, dangerously soft. "Do not disappoint me, Raven. Unless you wish to become like your father..." My back stiffened. "You need not worry, my lord." I flicked my fingers, sending two of his guards flying across the room. I was nothing like my father, that soft, Tayvian loving fool. Before I left Ramea, I made sure to pay him a visit. "Hello, Father." I walked down to the dungeons of the Rameon king's palace. "Raven," He greeted me tiredly. There was sadness on his face as he gazed at me. He was wasting his emotion. "I take it that this is not a purely social visit?" "Yes. The group of Tayvians that have eluded us for so long?" I smiled wickedly. "Looks like they've been found." Pure panic flashed across his face. "No." "Yes." I raised an eyebrow. "Perhaps now we'll discover what exactly it is you find special about this group." "It's not just me, Raven." He turned to me desperately. "Please, let them go." I narrowed my eyes. "Are you asking me for mercy, Father?" I smiled sweetly at him. "Perhaps you'd like to beg me? On your knees, preferably?" He turned away, as if he couldn't stand to look at me. I rolled my eyes. Looks like I won't get much more out of him. It doesn't matter. I have a hunt to go on. It was almost too easy to find them. I'd already gotten the only adult among their group, while she was out wandering before the others woke. She led me straight to their hideout. The fool. Now, I grinned at the look of horror on the elf-guy's face when he saw me. Instead of fighting, he turned and ran. To alert the others, no doubt. "No. Don't shoot," I commanded the Rameons behind me. "Let them know we're here." I smiled cruelly. "I always did love a good fight." I lifted my hands and shot a single dark spell at the elf, making sure to miss. I wanted him to get the message... What fun is there in a simple capture? The fight is what I live for. "What?" I gasped when Calaeron burst in with his dreaded message. I spun on Rilla accusingly. "Well, I suppose you're happy now. Didn't you say you wanted to stay here until the Rameons drag us out?" I regretted the words as soon as they were out of my mouth, when I saw the look on her face. Everyone glared at me. "Okay, whatever." I snapped. "We need to split up." "What?" Rilla stared at me. "Of course we have to stick together. Otherwise, if some get captured, how will we find them again?" "This way, we can increase the chances of some of us making it out," I replied coolly. "So you want some of us to be captured?" Rilla glared at me. "If anyone does, it will be your fault, Cress." "Whatever," I snapped. "We're wasting time here." (Cress isn't actually this cruel, she's just angry and scared. When members of the group get captured, she's going to feel very guilty. Liri, the two of them (Calaeron and Cress) could form a guilt club. Anyway, sorry for the super long post. Anyone's RPed with me before, you know I'm the queen of them. ) Last edited by Night Wish; 01-12-2014 at 03:39 AM. |
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